You're Never Over [A Jick/Joick Love Story] Intro (please read?)

Intro Nick Sun beamed through the curtains as I struggled to wake myself up and squint through my groggy eyes. I turned my head slightly, letting out a sigh of relief. He was gone. I rose slightly and winced, feeling new bruises line across my my pale skin. I pulled myself up, almost screaming from the pain. Why'd I do this? How'd I get in this situation? The unruly pain soared all through my lower area, my hips, my thighs, everything ached. I felt the tears brim my eyes as I slipped on my boxers, maybe I could get out. maybe, I could escape. I don't care anymore, I'm not mad, I need joe, I want to feel safe. Who cares anymore? it took awhile, but I made my way to the bathroom and flicked on the light, staring into the mirror. I choked a sob as I stared at the thing that stared back at me. scratches on one side of it's face, yellow, blotchy, bruise scaled the thing's skin. That THING was me. I can't take this. I clutched my chest, trying to stop myself from crying like a baby, my mind was finally un-clouding. Staying here was suicide. I knew I had to leave. I began to try and move as fast as my newly made injuries let me, throwing on my clothes, trying not to graze the bruises and wincing when i accidentally did. I grabbed my bag, feeling my heart race as I thought of the idea of seeing him again. my hand reached for the door knob. Maybe this is it. Maybe this is over now. Maybe I can escape. Just as I went to open the door so that I could run as fast as I could, and never look back--someone else did, from the other side. Was he back? What could I possibly do now? My breathing quickened as I waited for him to catch me trying to leave. Then this was It, I thought as the door began to open. This is where I would die. ----- Joe I stared at the images moving across the screen. Life, was like nothing now. Nothing without Nick. I thought, I thought maybe my life would go back to normal, but now i'm worse than ever. Why do I do such stupid things? Why'd I let him slip right through my fingers? I picture him smiling, laughing, blushing when I told him how cute he was. I missed him, gravely...and that scared me. It scared me how much I loved him, knowing he'd never take me back. Why'd I do it? Why'd I ruin everything? ---- Nick I decided to think happy thoughts as I waited for my final brutal beating. I know I'm going to die, my body won't be able to last after more damage. I love Joe. I love him so much. I'll just think of how much I love him. Maybe It'll be easier, Just thinking of him while I'm beaten to my death. ---- End Of Intro. was it stupd? It was stupid wasn't it? :( That was a look into the future, so If you liked it,please, please, comment. I'm new at this stuff, so advice would be really cool...what can I fix?